I. Introduction
A. Slums. Some people live in them, others do not even know of their existence, but they are something that affect the world as a whole.
B. Slums are places overcrowded with people who live in poverty and very poor conditions.
C. These conditions affect populations around the world because slums are more prone to disease,do not usually have the right education for children, and increase populations in cities significantly.
D. One of the things that people in slums face often is exposure to multiple diseases.
II. Defendable point #1
A. Since there is very few, if any, sanitation in slums, the people are more vulnerable to many diseases that are potentially fatal.
B. In this quote it shows that in this particular slum the sewage passes like a dirty river across the whole place. Many times this is the actual cause of the people being more vulnerable to diseases.
i.quote (shows statistics of how more at risk women and children are of getting certain diseases)
ii. paraphrase
C. Poverty leads to poor sanitation, which leads to vulnerability to diseases.
D.Poverty in these slums also leads to poor education in current and future generations.
III. Defendable point #2
A. Furthermore, the lack of proper education is the cause for future problems.
B. Education and money are major things in the world without one or the other, many people can not really get too far in life.
i. quote(talks about how they do not have proper education)
ii. paraphrase
C. If these children of the slums do not get educated then they have fewer job possibilities available. Most of them will be limited to working in others' homes doing the cleaning like their parents do.
D. Even though proper education is not provided, populations in slums are growing at an astounding rate.
IV.Defendable point #3
A.In addition, these places near large cities are growing faster and faster.
B. When the population of a place finds itself growing but the place is not able to keep up, problems arise. Places that were once abandoned or tranquil find themeselves overcrowded and without enough resources to properly sustain the people living there.
i.quote (statistics of current population growth and predicted city sizes.
ii. paraphrase
C. Since over the years the populations and formings of slums worldwide have not shown sign of slowing down soon, it is predicted that populations around the world will find themeselves growing at faster rates.
D. There are many affects that slums as a whole cause to populations around the world.
V. Conclusion
A. In conclusion, it is true that many people are unaware of what slums are but in time the existence of slums will become very present to the whole world.
B. Slums and the conditions its populace live in affect populations around the world because they are more prone to disease, can not provide proper education for the children living there, and increase populations in cities significantly.
C. With sewage flowing in the frontstep of houses, no one can really say that the people living in slums know proper hygeine. Education in slums is not something that happens very often which means fewer job opportunities available. These slums are growing faster and faster around cities causing a large increase in city populations.
D. With slum populations affecting everyone later on, it is only logical to start to wonder what it is that is happening to populations in the country sides of countries around the world.
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